I normally don't do poetry.
Normally, I don't even do translyrics.
Why?
Because I suck at picking the right words for a small amount of space.
In fact, I think there might've been a word to replace all of that, too. I just can't think of it. AHAHAorz. Anyways, I actually used to do a lot of poetry. Back when I was little, I loved writing poems. I still kinda do like the whole ring and whatnot with poetry. I just find it sorta difficult to understand sometimes.
However, that did not stop me from doing a sequel to Eva's poem because I felt like it 8D Actually, I was kinda worried because it was just an impulsive thing. I read it, I jotted something down and quickly hit publish before I could self-doubt. And then I self-doubted.
But yeee it turned out fine and eheheheeh <3 It was a nice thing to see considering how my week has been ahahah~
Anyways, just gonna casually put it up here as well. IT'S ALSO ON EBAH'S BLOG AND WHATNOT.
Yeah.
EDIT: Hey I did a 4th part. Which I'll prolly redo later when I have the braincells necessary. And I added the title.
Aspiration
A bird in a cage
With no will to fly,
Who aspires not,
Whose wings denied,
Feels neither longing,
Nor vexed, nor content;
Yet to be in this cage
This bird is meant.*
A bird in a cage
Loses the will to fly.
White wings, full-fledged;
But the heart will deny.
Nowhere to run,
Wishing not to roam.
In this cage
This bird is home.
With no will to fly,
Who aspires not,
Whose wings denied,
Feels neither longing,
Nor vexed, nor content;
Yet to be in this cage
This bird is meant.*
A bird in a cage
Loses the will to fly.
White wings, full-fledged;
But the heart will deny.
Nowhere to run,
Wishing not to roam.
In this cage
This bird is home.
A bird in a cage
Knows not how to fly--
Its wings inexperienced,
Its plight to deny
That skies can be soared;
Destination unfound.
Fearful is this bird,
And to this cage it’s bound.*
A bird in a cage
Learns not how to fly
But to dream and to wish
Of worlds undefined.
For it has grown weary,
And used to the pain.
This cage is its life,
A perennial stain.
Knows not how to fly--
Its wings inexperienced,
Its plight to deny
That skies can be soared;
Destination unfound.
Fearful is this bird,
And to this cage it’s bound.*
A bird in a cage
Learns not how to fly
But to dream and to wish
Of worlds undefined.
For it has grown weary,
And used to the pain.
This cage is its life,
A perennial stain.
*These stanzas are written by Eva.
HEHEHEHEHE♥
ReplyDeleteImpulsive writing is the best kind of writing anyway. well, sometimes.
IF ANYTHING COMES TO MIND AT ALL you should try to write a 4th part 8DDDDD
ReplyDeleteExcept I can't think of anything so.. idk maybe you can HAHA but it seems like a hard one.